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# Writing & House Style (ajs-writing-style)

AJS uses its **own author-date house style** — documented in the AJS Manuscript Preparation pages and
Formatting PDF — **not** the ASA Style Guide that ASA journals (e.g., ASR) require. This is a frequent,
avoidable mistake. Beyond mechanics, AJS prose should be **theoretically ambitious and legible to a
generalist sociologist**. Verify current style details on the live prep pages before submission.

## When to trigger

- Polishing the manuscript before `ajs-submission`
- Formatting citations, notes, and references to AJS house style
- A reader said the writing was "for specialists only," "buried the contribution," or "mis-styled"
- Converting a draft formatted in ASA or another style into AJS house style

## AJS house-style mechanics (verify on the live prep pages / PDF)

- **In-text citation:** **author-date**, name + year in parentheses; **"et al." for three or more
  authors**. (This is AJS's own format — confirm forms against the live pages; it is *not* the ASA
  Style Guide.)
- **Notes:** an **acknowledgment note on the cover sheet marked with an asterisk**; **substantive
  notes start at "1"** in the text; **footnotes or endnotes are both acceptable**.
- **References:** full reference list required; periodical entries give full author name, date, article
  title, periodical title, volume, and inclusive pages.
- **Manuscript format:** **serif typeface (e.g., Times Roman) ≥11 pt (preferably 12), double-spaced,
  ≥1-inch margins**.
- **Sections order (post-text):** notes, references, tables, figures, appendices — in that order.

## Write for the discipline (AJS voice)

- **Lead with the contribution.** State the theoretical payoff early; do not make a generalist reader
  excavate it.
- **Explain, don't gesture.** Define field-specific terms; a comparativist or ethnographer should be
  able to follow a quantitative paper, and vice versa.
- **Concision over length.** AJS has **no fixed word cap** but explicitly encourages concision, and
  **referees may need more time for papers over ~18,000 words** — long is allowed, not rewarded.
  Live-check current length guidance before upload.

## The AJS sentence-level prose bar (calibration, hedged)

Craft heuristics for the journal's long-form culture, not graded rules; confirm mechanical specifics against the journal's current submission guidelines.

- **Argument-forward paragraphs.** Each section opens by advancing the theoretical argument, then brings evidence to bear — not procedure first, theory last. AJS prose reads as sustained reasoning, which is why a 19,000-word article can feel tighter than a padded 12,000-word one.
- **Earn the length.** With no hard cap, the discipline is internal: cut any paragraph that does not move the concept, mechanism, cases, or stakes. Length is a budget the argument spends, not a target.
- **Generalist legibility under double-blind.** A cross-method referee must follow the logic. Define every field-specific term on first use; gloss notation; translate a coefficient into a substantive sentence.
- **Voice of craftsmanship.** AJS rewards writing that shows careful construction — claims hedged where evidence is partial, rival readings named, scope conditions stated in prose.

## Writing desk-reject and pushback patterns (AJS-specific fixes)

| Referee or editor signal | What it usually means | The AJS fix |
|--------------------------|-----------------------|-------------|
| "Reads for specialists only." | jargon wall, no glossing | rewrite the intro for a generalist; define terms in prose |
| "Contribution buried." | payoff arrives in the discussion | move the theoretical claim to the first two pages |
| "Formatted to ASA style." | wrong house style | convert to AJS author-date; notes start at "1" |
| "Long without warrant." | pages not earning their keep | cut procedural narration; keep argumentative prose |
| "Tone is defensive / thin." | rival readings ignored | name the strongest alternative and address it in text |

Illustrative: an ethnographic draft opens with four pages of site description before any concept; a referee writes "I only found the argument on page 12." The author moves the portable claim — an illustrative "interactional deference rituals reproduce class advantage without explicit gatekeeping" — to page 2, glosses two field-specific terms, and cuts scene-setting that did not advance the mechanism.

## Anti-patterns

- Formatting to the **ASA Style Guide** and assuming AJS accepts it (it has its own house style)
- Padding to "feel like an AJS paper" — length is tolerated, not a virtue
- Jargon a generalist sociologist cannot follow
- Burying the theoretical contribution in the discussion section
- Identifying self-references that break double-blind anonymity (see `ajs-submission`)
- Narrating method or scene before stating the theoretical stake — argument should lead

## Output format

```
【House style】AJS author-date (NOT ASA Style Guide)? citations + notes + refs conform? [Y/N]
【Format】serif ≥11pt, double-spaced, ≥1in margins? [Y/N]
【Contribution stated early】[Y/N]
【Generalist-legible】terms defined; cross-method reader can follow? [Y/N]
【Concision】tight; over ~18,000 words justified? [Y/N]
【Next】ajs-data-and-transparency
```

## Supplementary resources

- [`../../resources/external_tools.md`](../../resources/external_tools.md) — reference managers and AJS CSL style
- [`../../resources/official-source-map.md`](../../resources/official-source-map.md) — AJS house-style and manuscript-preparation pages