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# R&R Rebuttal (apsr-rebuttal)

An APSR **R&R is a strong signal** — it is "reserved for papers very close to publishable quality."
But publication generally needs **strong support from all or nearly all reviewers**, and the call is
the **editor's discretion**. So the response letter must move *every* reviewer toward yes while
keeping the editor confident the revision is convergent.

## When to trigger

- An R&R decision arrived and you are planning the revision + response letter
- Reviewers disagree with each other and you must reconcile their demands
- A reviewer requests analyses that would change the paper's claims
- Writing the cover note to the editor summarizing the revision

## Strategy

1. **Read the editor's letter as the rubric.** The editor signals which points are decisive. Solve
   those first and foremost; the editor adjudicates disagreements among reviewers.
2. **One point-by-point response, every comment addressed.** Quote each comment, then respond. Never
   skip one — silence reads as non-compliance.
3. **Concede or rebut explicitly, with evidence.** For each: did what was asked (say where, with the
   new text/table number), or push back **respectfully with a reason** (theory, design, or evidence).
   Editors respect a well-argued disagreement more than a hollow capitulation that weakens the paper.
4. **Reconcile conflicting reviewers openly.** When R2 wants the opposite of R3, say so, choose a
   principled path, and explain the tradeoff to the editor. Don't silently satisfy one and ignore the
   other.
5. **Protect the contribution.** Add robustness and clarifications; resist changes that dilute the
   general-significance claim that earned the R&R. Defend scope conditions rather than over-claiming.
6. **Keep anonymity intact** in the revised manuscript (still double-anonymous), and **update the
   reproducibility package** so new tables/figures remain reproducible (see
   `apsr-transparency-and-data-policy`).

## Response-letter format

For each reviewer comment:

```
> [Quoted reviewer comment]

Response: [What we did / why we respectfully disagree].
Change: [Section/page/table-figure number where the revision appears].
```

Open with a short **summary of the main changes** to the editor; group by reviewer; end the per-comment
entries with the location of every change so the editor can verify quickly.

## Anti-patterns

- Ignoring or merging away a comment without a visible response
- Capitulating to a request that breaks the paper's logic just to please a reviewer
- Defensive or dismissive tone toward reviewers
- "We thank the reviewer" with no actual change or argued reason
- Adding analyses that quietly contradict the original claim without acknowledging it
- Letting the revised manuscript or new exhibits drift out of sync with the deposited package

## Output format

```
【Editor's decisive points】addressed first? [list]
【Coverage】every reviewer comment answered? [Y/N]
【Concede vs rebut】each tagged with evidence + change location
【Reviewer conflicts】reconciled and explained to editor? [Y/N]
【Contribution protected】no dilution of general significance? [Y/N]
【Anonymity + package updated】[Y/N]
【Next】resubmit via Editorial Manager
```

## Triage table for an APSR R&R

At the APSA/Cambridge flagship, publication generally needs near-unanimous reviewer support and the
editor adjudicates, so triage each comment by who must be satisfied and what the comment threatens.

| Comment signal | Who owns the call | Default move in the response |
|----------------|-------------------|------------------------------|
| Editor flags it as decisive | editor | solve first, headline it in the cover note |
| Two reviewers want opposite things | editor | pick a principled path, explain the tradeoff openly |
| Reviewer asks for an analysis that would change the claim | author + editor | run it, then defend or re-scope the contribution honestly |
| Reviewer wants the result generalized beyond design | author | add scope conditions; resist over-claiming |
| Reviewer disputes a methodological choice across traditions | author | answer on that tradition's own terms (pluralism) |

## Worked micro-example (illustrative)

A hypothetical R&R draws four reviews. The editor's letter names **two** decisive points
(identification and general significance). R2 wants the formal model **cut**; R4 wants it **expanded**.
The disciplined letter opens with a three-sentence summary to the editor, addresses identification and
significance first with new text/table locations, then reconciles R2/R4 by **keeping a compact model in
the main text and moving derivations to the appendix** — stating the tradeoff explicitly rather than
silently siding with one reviewer. Of **31** total comments, **31** receive a quoted response; **22**
are conceded with a change location, **9** are rebutted with a reason. (Counts illustrative.)

## Referee-pushback patterns and the APSR-specific repair

- *"Revision diluted the general-significance claim that earned the R&R."* → Restore the discipline-wide
  framing; defend scope conditions instead of retreating to a subfield result.
- *"New tables don't match the deposited package."* → Re-verify the reproducibility package so every
  revised exhibit re-runs; the editorial office checks this before publication.
- *"You ignored a comment."* → Silence reads as non-compliance; quote and answer every one, even to say
  why you respectfully disagree.
- *"Capitulation weakened the paper's logic."* → A well-argued disagreement is respected more than a
  hollow concession; editors at a generalist venue reward a coherent contribution.

## Calibration anchors (hedged)

- Treat the **editor's letter as the rubric**: at a discretion-based generalist venue, the editor
  weighs reviewers rather than counting votes.
- Because APSR spans formal, quantitative, qualitative, and normative work, a cross-tradition reviewer
  objection is answered in *that* tradition's idiom, not deflected.
- The exact decision-category language and editor-discretion policy can change — confirm against the
  journal's current peer-review guidelines before quoting them in the letter.

## Supplementary resources

- [`../../resources/official-source-map.md`](../../resources/official-source-map.md) — R&R/decision categories and editor-discretion policy